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PostSubject: Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted   Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted EmptyThu Nov 04, 2010 5:53 pm

This is where I will post all episodes!

ALREADY RELEASED:

The Pre-Show
Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5

COMING SOON:
Episode 6+
Reunion


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PostSubject: THE PRE-SHOW   Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted EmptyThu Nov 04, 2010 6:01 pm

THE PRE-SHOW
Jeff Probst walks out on a stage to welcome us all to the beginning of an exciting new season of Survivor. This season will take place in Panama and will be nicknamed Exile Island, a name connected to the twist of the season.
In the very first episode two people will be sent to Exile Island, and with a hidden immunity idol located somewhere on Exile Island it can be a good thing to go there, however, being exiled takes you away from your tribe and the game, so that could also hurt you in the long run.
Some promises to the season: The hidden immunity idol will be used on more than one occasion and will help change the game each time.
When someone is sent to Exile Island they will not return to the game until the following immunity challenge, even if their tribe heads to Tribal Council.

The game will start with four tribes divided by gender and age.

The Bayoneta tribe will be the younger women, and will consist of:

Abby Lavelle
Age ~ 26 years old
Character Traits: Strong Willed, Bad Attitude, Very Blunt.
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted AbbyLavelle

Abby explains how she considers herself a nice enough person but she won’t put up with people who whine, and will do whatever she has to in order to win.

Cynthia Jaden
Age ~ 29 years old
Character Traits: Keeps her word, Supportive
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted CynthiaJaden

Cynthia is shown in confessional stating that once she makes an alliance with someone, there is no way she will ever go against it. She wants to stick with a few people to the end of the game.

Karianne Juliana
Age ~ 24 years old
Character Traits: Emotional, Clingy
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted KarianneJoliana

Karianne admits that she isn’t sure if she can handle this game as she is very emotional and is hoping that she is on a tribe of supportive people.

Kellie Wellesley
Age ~ 21 years old
Character Traits: Hyper, Talkative, Emotional.
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted KellieWellesley

Kellie starts to explains that she is very excited to be here and that she hopes to have a tribe that is very upbeat and excited to be here as well.


The Casaya tribe will be the older women’s tribe, and will feature:

Amber Norwell
Age ~ 31 years old
Character Traits: Motivational, Driven
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted AmberNorwell

Amber states that she plans to be the motivational support for her tribe, she feels that is the way to have a winning tribe.

Crystal Malcolm
Age ~ 36 years old
Character Traits: Out of Shape, Intelligent, Driven
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted CrystalMalcolm

Crystal admits that she is not in the best shape and that she doesn’t go outside often but she is a fan of the show and wants to prove to herself and her family that she can do this.

Jessica Colden
Age ~ 39 years old
Character Traits: Easily Manipulated, Determined, Bully
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted JessicaColden

Jessica quickly states that she will do whatever it takes to make sure she is on the winners side. She will not align with weak people and she will help form an alliance that will control the game.

Kerri Drear
Age ~ 44 years old
Character Traits: Manipulative, Bully, Arrogant
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted KerriDrear

Kerri refuses to deal with weak people and she will be blunt in her opinions cause she does not like fake people or liars. She says that she will find a way to control this game and she will make it to the end and win.


The La Mina tribe is going to feature the older men;

Ben Billings
Age ~ 30 years old
Character Traits: Athletic, Driven
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted BenBillings

Ben reveals that he knows he’ll be a physical threat in this game, he has played sports all his life and loves the outdoors. He considers himself likeable enough for this game and sees no problem making it to the merge, after that will be a challenge though.

Mark Ashley
Age ~ 41 years old
Character Traits: Loner, Delusional, Self-Absorbed
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted MarkAshley

Mark explains that he won’t put up with people treating him with disrespect, the second someone does he’ll let them know he has a problem with them. He is ready to play this game and make it far.

Mike Thomason
Age ~ 37 years old
Character Traits: Friendly, Smart, Driven
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted MikeThomason

Mike reveals that he wanted to do this show more so for the adventure than the title. He knows he isn’t the strongest but knows he can handle the game and challenges.

Richard Barker
Age ~ 33 years old
Character Traits: Driven, Smart, Emotional
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted RichardBarker

Richard says that his plan going into the game is to get to know everyone on his tribe and adapt from there.


And the last tribe is the Vivero tribe, which will feature the younger guys;

Cory Hartville
Age ~ 27 years old
Character Traits: Driven, Athletic, Quiet
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted CoryHartville

Cory reveals that he knows how to be in a group but not be the center of it, while still keeping a grip on what is going on and to an extent, control. He is not one bit worried that he’ll go early. He is sure he’s gonna be around for the long haul.

Jerrell Liddell
Age ~ 24 years old
Character Traits: Immature, Athletic, Whines
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted JerrellLiddell

Jerrell explains that he knows what he wants and he always takes it one way or another, and he wants to win so he will.

Joey Regis
Age ~ 21 years old
Character Traits: Childish, Arrogant, Spoiled
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted JoeyRegis

Joey explains that he is ready to have some fun and no one better ruin it for him or they will go home. He is smarter than most of the people here and will control everything.

Robert Carver
Age ~ 28 years old
Character Traits: Intelligent, Friendly, Naive
Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted RobertCarver

Robert says that he is very smart but is going to do what he can to not let people know that as he feels it would cause him to be eliminated early on. He knows he can be a bit trusting and needs to try and watch out for liars and people who will take advantage of that.


And that is the cast for the new season of Survivor! Who will outwit, outplay and outlast the others, gotta read on to find out!

PREVIEW FOR THE PREMIERE
The castaways learn about being divided into four tribes of four each.
An argument at the very first challenge divides a tribe in half!
On the way to camp, the tribes all have an outsider or are divided in some ways, leading to conflicts.
The first person is voted out!
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THE BEGINNING
Jeff Probst welcomes the sixteen new castaways, who at this time are divided by gender, 8 women on one side, and 8 men on the other side. Jeff tells them all that this season there will be four tribes instead of the usual two.
The La Mina tribe consists of Ben Billings, a 30 year old High School Football Coach; Mark Ashley, a 41 year old Retail Store Manager; Mike Thomason, a 37 year old writer; and Richard Barker, a 33 year old lawyer.
The Casaya tribe consisting of Amber Norwell, a 31 year old Nurse; Crystal Malcolm, a 36 year old Mother; Jessica Colden, a 39 year old Therapist; and Kerri Drear, a 44 year old Aspiring Actress.
The Bayoneta tribe includes Abby Lavelle, a 26 year old journalist, Cynthia Jaden, a 29 year old Elementary School Teacher; Karianne Juliana, a 24 year old Musician; and Kellie Wellesley, a 21 year old College Student.
The Vivero tribe will feature Cory Hartville, a 27 year old waiter; Jerrell Liddell, a 24 year old Aspiring Actor; Joey Regis, a 21 year old college student; and Robert Carver, a 28 year old Physics Teacher.
The tribes are told by Jeff that they will participate in a challenge right away. This challenge will determine who’ll be the first person exiled, and which tribe gets flint.
The tribes begin the challenge, with the younger tribes both performing better than the older tribe. In no time the Bayoneta tribe finishes first, winning flint, and Vivero comes in second, leaving La Mina and Casaya fighting for third.
Casaya struggles more than La Mina causing them to come in last place. Kerri immediately blames Crystal for this causing tension on their tribe already. La Mina gets third place.
Casaya is then told to send someone to Exile Island until the next challenge. Kerri pushes for Crystal but Amber backs Crystal, saying it wasn’t all her fault. Jessica sides with Kerri and since they were deadlocked, and no one else willing to switch, Crystal agrees to stay at Exile.
With Crystal at Exile, the four tribes begin their journey to their new camps.

EXILE ISLAND
Crystal
Crystal swears immediately that one way or another, Kerri and Jessica will lose this game. She will do everything she can to make sure of it.
She looks for the idol, trying to figure out the clue but gets lost and doesn’t know where to look further.

TRIP TO CAMP ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
On The walk to camp, the tribe discusses Kerri’s outburst and how they feel they’ll easily be able to defeat them in challenges and in the game.
After that discussion cools off, Kellie starts going off on how cool it is to be here and how she is excited to do more challenges and keeps saying their tribe is going to be the best.
Abby gets so annoyed she starts walking ahead of them with the map, not helping out with supplies nor does she listen to any of them.
Karianne gets really tired and wants to break but Abby refuses, saying they need to get to camp as quickly as possible.

TRIP TO CAMP ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Jessica & Amber
Within minutes of heading to camp, Jessica and Kerri start to boss Amber around. She tells them that the only way they can make it is if they work together, they agree and tell her to shut up and do as they say so that they can.
In confessional Amber states that she does not like Kerri or Jessica and that she knows Crystal and her are going to have a battle against these two but somehow they will overcome them.

TRIP TO CAMP ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben, Richard & Mark
The tribe seems to get along at first and make good time to get to camp, Ben, Mike and Richard get along very well and talk and joke all the way to camp, leaving Mark outside of their conversations.
Mark begins to slow down, not caring to push forward quickly. Ben asks him to keep up but he refuses, saying that they don’t seem to care to talk to him so he doesn’t feel like rushing to camp.

TRIP TO CAMP ~ VIVERO
Cory, Jerrell, Joey & Robert
As the tribe starts on their way to camp, Robert leads them, and they all follow him as none of the others really care to take the lead.
Halfway on their way to camp, Jerrell and Joey start to argue with one another about what they should do once they get to camp, Joey wants to just relax and Jerrell wants to explore the area.
In confessional Cory states that this game is going to be difficult to win with this tribe, he hopes to switch tribes at some point.

ARRIVING AT CAMP ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
Once they finally reach camp Abby is ready to start putting camp together but Karianne, Cynthia and Kellie are exhausted and pass out on the beach.
In confessional, Abby states that she does not think she stands a chance with this tribe. She hopes the tribes don’t stay this way for long.
After a little while Cynthia gets up to help Abby work on camp together. Abby tells her that she is hoping for a twist that shakes up the tribes because she doesn’t have faith they can win challenges, Cynthia tells her not to give up so easily, that they will be fine.

ARRIVING AT CAMP ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Jessica & Amber
They make it to camp just as the sun is going down and quickly set up a small camp on the beach, knowing that the next day is going to be a busy day.
Amber tries to remain upbeat and helpful but both Kerri and Jessica make that nearly impossible for her.
Kerri states in confessional that she doesn’t like lazy people like Crystal or people who are way too upbeat all of the time like Amber, which is why she is being so harsh towards them cause they deserve it.

ARRIVING AT CAMP ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben, Richard & Mark
Once at camp Mark decides he doesn’t want to help with camp right away and lies down to relax, this angers the other three and they make a pack to vote him off first.
In confessional Mark feels like a complete outsider and wishes he had someone like Kerri or Jessica here, he is impressed with how they stood their ground against someone as weak as Crystal.

ARRIVING AT CAMP ~ VIVERO
Cory, Jerrell, Joey & Robert
Once at camp Joey lies down, not caring to listen to Jerrell whine any more, which is all he does, about how tired he is, about Joey, and the fact that he needs food or he’ll never last.
Both Cory and Robert walk off and make a pack to help each other out, knowing neither of them can count on Joey or Jerrell.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE #1
The tribes all enter the challenge beach where Jeff is waiting for them, he calls for Crystal to rejoin Casaya and he asks her if she had any luck finding the hidden immunity idol, to which all she says is maybe.
They then do the challenge which is a relay…
The first team to win is…
VIVERO!
The second team to win is…
BAYONETA!
The final team to win is…
CASAYA!
Meaning La Mina is the first tribe to head to tribal council.
With Vivero as the winner and Casaya as the last team to win, Vivero gets to send one member of Casaya to Exile Island, they decide to send Jessica.

EXILE ISLAND
Jessica
Jessica is not one bit happy to be at Exile Island and swears that she will take the Vivero tribe out, one by one.
She immediately begins to look at the clue for the Hidden Immunity Idol but cannot for the life of her figure it out at all.

AFTER IC ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
As soon as they return to camp Kellie is beyond excited that they won and didn’t win last. Abby is frustrated cause they didn’t come in first but Kellie doesn’t care, further annoying Abby.
Cynthia and Karianne take a walk to get water and Cynthia tells her about Abby having no faith in the tribe. Karianne says that she doesn’t like Abby’s attitude, and thinks she should be first to go, Cynthia isn’t so sure though as she believes Abby is the strongest person on their tribe.

AFTER IC ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Crystal & Amber
Kerri storms into camp, completely flipping out that Jessica was sent to exile. That she cannot believe they would send her over Amber or Crystal. The two of them just roll their eyes at her and walk away.
Alone, they form an alliance, and promise to vote both Kerri and Jessica out as soon as possible.

AFTER IC ~ VIVERO
Cory, Jerrell, Joey & Robert
After they return, Joey says in confessional that he is relieved that they won, as he knows he would have been voted out had they not won. He’s going to try and get Cory and Robert on his side and against Jerrell.
Jerrell is excited they won first and thinks they made the best move sending Jessica to exile as she is easily Casaya’s strongest member. Robert and Cory agree.

AFTER IC ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben, Richard & Mark
Within minutes of walking back into camp Mark flips out, yelling at the other three saying that he knows that he is gone but that they will pay for throwing the challenge. All three swear they didn’t but he won’t hear any of it.
In confessional Ben states that he wishes they had thrown the challenge as it would definitely look better for them but there is no way they would do something like that.

TRIBAL COUNCIL #1
Mike, Ben, Richard & Mark
The four members of La Mina enter Tribal Council and are instructed by Jeff to get their torches and light them, as fire represents their life in this game, once their torch is snuffed, so are they.
He immediately starts asking them what happened in the challenge and Mark starts going on a rant about how Ben, Mike and Richard threw the challenge to get rid of him.
Jeff asks them if this is true, they all deny it, saying that it would be stupid to throw a challenge this early and with only four people. Mark tells Jeff that they are lying.
Ben admits that they will definitely be voting Mark out, he hasn’t helped and is way too negative. This only further irritates Mark, who is so mad to be stuck with bullies.
Mike goes on to say that they were not bullies, that they never left him out of any conversation, that he never tried to participate and he doesn’t help around camp or tries to socialize with them except to make outrageous accusations.
Jeff decides to end the discussion and get to the vote…
After all four vote, Jeff gets the voting urn…
He begins to read the votes…
MARK…
BEN…
MARK…
The final vote…
MARK!

Mark, The Tribe Has Spoken!

As Mark leaves the game, Jeff tells them that with what appeared to be the negative aspect of their tribe, hopefully they can turn things around, then sends them back to camp.

MARK’S FINAL WORDS
All Mark does is blame Ben, Mike and Richard for making no effort to include him, and then for throwing the challenge to get rid of him. He hopes that Kerri and Jessica make the game hell for them, and make them lose.

VOTES:
Ben ~ MARK
Mark ~ BEN
Mike ~ MARK
Richard ~ MARK
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PostSubject: Re: Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted   Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 10:59 pm

I think the line between Older and Younger is a little bit skewed...

Case in point:

8 year old Rupert Grint on La Mina.
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PostSubject: Re: Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted   Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted EmptyMon Nov 08, 2010 11:43 pm

the pictures are just to represent the people, he's not 8 years old in the story, his age is listed in the pre-show
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I know.

He looks young for his age, though XD
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I've actually read the story now, it's pretty good. I would have liked to see actual dialogue though :/
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RETURN TO CAMP ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben & Richard
The La Mina tribe returns to camp and all agree that with Mark gone they have a chance to get back in the game; they aren’t out of it yet.
In confessional, Mike says that Ben and Richard are a blast to be around and hopes that they stick together cause they could totally control the game come merge.

TRUTH IS HARD TO HEAR ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
It is morning and they are all working on putting their camp together. Kellie is talking up a storm and no one seems to be very happy about it. After a while Abby flips out on her, telling her to be quiet for a little as she is really annoying.
Kellie gets very upset at this, bursting into tears and breaking down, she runs off and leaves the rest of them.
Both Cynthia and Karianne tell Abby that she shouldn’t have been so cruel.
In confessional, Kellie says that she doesn’t really want to play the game anymore. She was really enjoying her tribe until today; Abby just ruined it for her.

THE QUEEN WILL LOSE ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Crystal & Amber
Kerri is moping about, refusing to help with camp. Amber and Crystal agree to make a camp the way they want to and to not let Kerri or Jessica control the set-up.
Kerri admits in confessional that she is not putting forth any effort but doesn’t feel any reason too; she doesn’t want to be near either Crystal or Amber.

NO FRIENDS HERE ~ VIVERO
Cory, Jerrell, Joey & Robert
Joey is still just relaxing on the beach, but is getting bored and wants to have some fun, tries to get Cory to race him. After a little Cory agrees.
Robert is stuck with Jerrell and is annoyed that he is working on camp alone as Jerrell would rather just sit and cook food.
Jerrell takes a walk by himself and says that there are no friends here and he doesn’t really care to be here, it isn’t fun at all.

TO THE FINAL THREE ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben & Richard
The three guys are sitting relaxing after working on their camp all day and talk about the game. They each agree that they would like the three of them to be the last three in the game and promise never to vote one another out.
Richard states in confessional that he likes Ben and Mike and will stick with them as long as possible but if he finds they are gonna hurt him in the game he will vote them out.

ONE WAY TO WIN ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
Cynthia and Kellie have a discussion; Kellie wants Abby out first and knows that Karianne does as well. Cynthia tells her that they need to win challenges in order to make it far, therefore they need Abby. Kellie agrees but says she doesn’t want to be stuck with Abby for the entire game, Cynthia agrees.
In confessional, Cynthia says that she likes both Kellie and Karianne but does not like Abby, however says that the only person on this tribe she won’t vote for right now is Abby because she is the strength of this tribe and in order to win they need strength.

KEEPING HOPE ALIVE ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Crystal & Amber
The three women are eating food, Amber and Crystal are trying to get to know one another, Kerri keeps interrupting them making snarky comments.
Crystal says that they need to come together in order to do better in the challenges, that they were lucky last challenge, Kerri tells her to shut up, that the first time they lose will be a blessing cause then she can go home.
In confessional, Crystal says that she is hoping to get a chance to take Kerri out of the game quicker rather than later, so that she can turn things around for herself in this game.

GOTTA KEEP WINNING ~ VIVERO
Cory, Jerrell, Joey & Robert
The four guys discuss the other tribes and wonder who was the first person voted out, they all agree that they think Mark seemed to be an outsider and is probably gone.
Joey makes a comment about how Jerrell is this tribe’s outsider and this leads to a shouting match between the two.
Cory steps up and tells them they need to work together so they can win challenges, and they listen but stop talking.

EXILE ISLAND
Jessica
Jessica complains about how she does not want to come here again, that she has had no luck finding the idol and is hoping that she never returns here.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE #2
The tribes all enter the challenge beach where Jeff is waiting for them.

As the La Mina tribe walks in, no one is surprised to see that Mark was voted out.

Jeff then calls for Jessica to rejoin Casaya and he asks her if she had any luck finding the hidden immunity idol, she tells him that it is hidden for a reason.

They then do the challenge which is a puzzle relay…

The first team to win is…

LA MINA!

The second team to win is…

CASAYA!

The final team to win is…

VIVERO!

Meaning Bayoneta is heading to tribal council.

With La Mina as the winner and Vivero as the last team to win, La Mina gets to send one member of Vivero to Exile Island, they decide to send Cory.

EXILE ISLAND
Cory
As Cory enters Exile Island the first thing he does is read the clues to the Hidden Immunity Idol. He starts to piece together the clues, hoping he can find it.
He explains that if he were to get the hidden immunity idol it could help him put together a power alliance that controls this game, it would also allow himself some protection.

ALL TOGETHER FOR THE FIRST TIME ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Jessica, Crystal & Amber
As the tribe returns to camp Amber makes the comment that this is the first time they are all together at camp. Crystal says that is true, she hadn’t thought of that.
Kerri and Jessica don’t care as they both wish that either Amber or Crystal had been sent to Exile Island that way they didn’t have to see them.

WHEN IT RAINS, IT POURS ~ VIVERO
Jerrell, Joey & Robert
As the tribe enters camp none of the guys are feeling very cheerful. Joey states that Cory is the backbone of this tribe and they are just not going to make it without him around.
Robert goes off on his own and says that he wishes that he had been sent to Exile Island as he wants a chance to look for the hidden immunity idol. He hopes that Cory does not find it.

WE’RE ALL FRIENDS HERE ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben & Richard
The tribe celebrates as they enter camp, excited with their big comeback, going from losing the first challenge to coming in first in the second challenge.
They all talk about Exile Island and agree that the hidden immunity idol is something to keep in mind when sending people, none of them are worried about Cory though.

BEFORE SENDING HER HOME ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
None of the girls are happy to be going to tribal council and all agree that this is not going to be fun. Abby tells them all that as there are only four of them that they should come to an agreement together for the good of the tribe. Cynthia agrees with that.
Abby says she thinks the tribe would be better off voting for Kellie, as she is just too much to deal with and it is bringing the tribe down.
Karianne disagrees, as she feels that the best move would be to vote out the person who is always negative and that, she says, is Abby.
Cynthia steps in and says that they need a strong tribe and need to come together on this vote, as they do not want a tribe.
At this point they all stop discussing it and figure it out individually.

TRIBAL COUNCIL #2
Abby, Kellie, Cynthia, & Karianne
The four members of Bayoneta enter Tribal Council and are instructed by Jeff to get their torches and light them, as fire represents their life in this game, once their torch is snuffed, so are they.

He immediately starts asking them what has been happening at camp.

Cynthia states that they are all trying to make it work but that there are a lot of flaws with this tribe.

Jeff asks her to elaborate and she does, she tells him how Abby wants Kellie out and vice versus, and how Karianne also wants Abby out but that Cynthia feels Abby is the strongest member of the tribe, plus how Karianne has been struggling since day one so she has no clue how the vote is going to go tonight.

Jeff asks Kellie and Abby why each want the other out.

Kellie says that she wants Abby out mainly because it is obvious Abby wants her out, plus she has just been unnecessarily mean to her and she won’t put up with it.

Abby wants Kellie gone, she says because she never stops talking and is always going and it wears everyone down which is why they cannot come together as a group.

Karianne steps in and says that she has a problem with the way that Abby talks to each of them and agrees with Kellie.

Cynthia tells Karianne that the best move would be to vote her out, as much as it pains her to do it she feels that she has struggled far too much and this is only day six.

Jeff decides to end the discussion and get to the vote…

After all four votes, Jeff gets the voting urn…

He begins to read the votes…

KARIANNE…

ABBY…

KARIANNE…

The final vote…

KARIANNE!

Karianne, The Tribe Has Spoken!

As Karianne leaves the game, Jeff tells them that it seems this tribe is in shambles and that they better hope voting Karianne out is enough to turn things around.

KARIANNE’S FINAL WORDS
Karianne just states that it was a struggle for her and that she was grateful for the opportunity and is sad it is ending so soon, she wishes Kellie the best of luck.

VOTES:
Abby ~ KARIANNE
Cynthia ~ KARIANNE
Karianne ~ ABBY
Kellie ~ KARIANNE

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Thank you very much for reading Episode 2 of SURVIVOR: Panama Exile. Please spend a few minutes to leave some comments and/or predictions for the rest of the story.



COMMENTS & QUESTIONS

(A) What did you think of this episode? Please be as detailed as you can, wherever possible.

(B) What was your overall favorite part of the episode?

(C) What would you rate this episode out of 10? (1 being the lowest; 10 being the highest)

(D) Do you have any questions about this episode that you'd like to see cleared up in a future episode or for me to answer?



1. SOLE SURVIVOR POLL

(A) Which castaway do you think will be the Sole Survivor?



2. WHAT'S NEXT POLL

(A) Which castaway(s) will be voted off in Episode 3?

(B) Do you have any other predictions for Episode 3?



3. POPULARITY POLL

(A) Please rate each castaway's popularity from 1-10. 1 is the lowest score, while 10 is the highest. Include any comments you have on the players, and rank players even if they have been eliminated.

Abby
Amber
Ben
Cory
Crystal
Cynthia
Jerrell
Joey
Karianne
Kellie
Kerry
Mark
Mike
Richard
Robert


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I straight up ripped this from one of the better known fanfic writers at Survivor Sucks. (The formatting is a little weird)
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Thank you very much for reading Episode 2 of SURVIVOR: Panama Exile. Please spend a few minutes to leave some comments and/or predictions for the rest of the story.



COMMENTS & QUESTIONS

(A) What did you think of this episode? Please be as detailed as you can, wherever possible.

I think it needed a 'Previoulsy On' segment. I forgot Jessica was on Exile. The little bitch fights on the female tribes are great!

(B) What was your overall favorite part of the episode?

The clusterfuck tribal council!

(C) What would you rate this episode out of 10? (1 being the lowest; 10 being the highest)

7, just as a base rating. The other episodes will be rated around this.

(D) Do you have any questions about this episode that you'd like to see cleared up in a future episode or for me to answer?

No.


1. SOLE SURVIVOR POLL

(A) Which castaway do you think will be the Sole Survivor?

Kellie. She's being painted as the positive side of her battle.

2. WHAT'S NEXT POLL

(A) Which castaway(s) will be voted off in Episode 3?

Amber or Crystal. They're too over the top to go far enough together.

(B) Do you have any other predictions for Episode 3?

Tribe switch?


3. POPULARITY POLL

(A) Please rate each castaway's popularity from 1-10. 1 is the lowest score, while 10 is the highest. Include any comments you have on the players, and rank players even if they have been eliminated.

Abby - 6
Amber - 8 (Better bitch than Abby)
Ben - 2 (Very under the radar)
Cory - 8 (Cool enough)
Crystal - 6
Cynthia - 6
Jerrell - 4 (Boring, and hates the game)
Joey - 7 (Seems cool. Wtf was with the racing?)
Karianne - 3 (Such a terrible boot)
Kellie - 6 (Really emotional. I think she might win.)
Kerri - 4 (Negative bitch)
Mark - 8 (Raging bitchiness was amazing)
Mike - 5 (Kinda under the radar.)
Richard - 7 (Only member of his tribe that had some visibility)
Robert - 6 (Got a little strategy talk, but he was kinda hidden.)
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thanks for the comments, that really helps me know if you are reading some characters as I want you too or if you aren't. It is something I can look at when I write the other episodes.

I was sorta surprised that you liked Mark, when I originally wrote this everyone hated him. He made it to the final 5, when re-writing this I felt he was someone that was forgettable and others would be better to keep long term. Karianne was liked originally having made it to the final 6 originally but I felt she wasn't as good a character as others.

Again, thanks for following along and reading these. Hope more people will fill that out as it really is helpful for me.
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Pete !!! git yur next eppy up! ASAP!
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posting the new episode now Smile
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Sweet, ill have something to read when I get home tonite!
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FOR TRIBE UNITY ~ BAYONETA
Abby, Kellie & Cynthia

The girls enter camp and Cynthia thanks both Kellie and Abby for working together for the good of the group.
They both agree to work together and put their differences aside for now.
In confessional, Kellie swears that she is not going to forget about the way that Abby has treated her but for now she’ll deal with her but promises she will get her out of this game at some point.

THE WEAK LINK ~ LA MINA
Mike, Ben & Richard
The three guys are putting their camp together when Ben and Mike are away from Richard and discuss the game, both agree that Richard is their weak link.

They both form a final two alliance.

Ben states in confessional that he will definitely stick with Mike, he doesn’t think that Richard is that smart, so doesn’t have much faith or trust in him.

A TRIBE DIVIDED ~ CASAYA
Kerri, Jessica, Crystal & Amber
Amber and Crystal discuss the game. They pray that a switch will occur that will get them away from Kerri and Jessica.

Kerri continues complaining about Crystal and Amber to Jessica. She agrees with her and they contemplate throwing the next challenge to get one of them out.

SILENCE ~ VIVERO
Jerrell, Joey & Robert
None of the guys are talking to one another.

Robert is the only one working on camp, while Joey is sleeping and Jerrell is over at the beach.

In confessional, Robert complains that he is losing his patience with his tribe.

EXILE ISLAND
Cory
Cory is looking for the idol and feels that he is getting closer and closer to finding it. After a few minutes Cory finds the idol.
He states that he is very excited to have the idol and hopes that this will help turn the game in his favor.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE #3
The tribes all enter the challenge beach where Jeff is waiting for them.

As the Bayoneta tribe walks in, they are told that Karianne has been voted out.

Jeff then calls for Cory to rejoin Vivero.

Jeff then tells everyone to drop their buffs. Then they have to pick new buffs out of a bag. The two new tribes are:

Casaya ~ Abby, Amber, Ben, Cory, Cynthia, Joey & Kerri
Vivero ~ Crystal, Jerrell, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

They then do the challenge which is a swimming challenge…

The winning team is…

VIVERO!

Meaning Casaya is heading to tribal council.

With Vivero the winners they get to send one member of Casaya too Exile Island, they decide to send Amber.

EXILE ISLAND
Amber
As she enters Exile Island, Amber discusses the fact that she thinks that Crystal pushed for her to be sent to Exile to be safe from Tribal Council. She hopes that it works out.

CELEBRATION TIME ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jerrell, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

Robert and Jerrell welcome their new tribe mates to their camp and everyone celebrates the switch.

In confessional, Jessica states that she feels she was put on the losing tribe and hates being separated from Kerri and stuck with Crystal.

Crystal talks with Mike and Robert and discuss the situation that happened at Casaya. Mike and Robert both promise her that they will help her take Jessica and Kerri out of the game. They agree on a four person alliance that’ll include Richard and to get Ben and Amber come merge time.

A NEW DAY ~ CASAYA
Abby, Ben, Cory, Cynthia, Joey & Kerri
As the tribe enters camp, Kerri welcomes them all to camp and they all start discussing the game thus far.

As the tribe gets tired of talking, they all go off in different directions to start fixing camp up to fit them all.

Kerri and Cory start talking one on one for a few minutes and decide to work together but to keep it under wraps.

Abby and Ben hit it off very quickly and promise to have one another’s back.

When it comes to discussing the vote, no one really feels confident about anything.

TRIBAL COUNCIL #3
Abby, Ben, Cory, Cynthia, Joey & Kerri

The six members of Casaya enter Tribal Council and are instructed by Jeff to get their torches and light them, as fire represents their life in this game, once their torch is snuffed, so are they.

He immediately starts asking them what has been happening at camp.

Cynthia explains that she really likes her tribe and has no idea how to vote tonight. Abby, Ben and Cory all agree.

Joey says that he knows who they should vote for as he feels that the weakest link is Cynthia, so she should be the one voted out tonight.

While Kerri smiles, Cynthia gets defensive, saying that she works her butt off and that they should keep her for being a hard worker, unlike Joey.

Jeff decides to end the discussion and get to the vote…

After all six votes, Jeff gets the voting urn…

He begins to read the votes…

JOEY…

JOEY…

CYNTHIA…

CYNTHIA…

CYNTHIA…

The final vote…

CYNTHIA!

Cynthia, The Tribe Has Spoken!

As Cynthia leaves the game, Jeff tells them that it seems this new tribe is more open about who to vote out than usual, should keep things interesting.

CYNTHIA’S FINAL WORDS
Cynthia is in shock about being voted out and hopes that Joey is taken out as soon as possible. She wishes the best of luck to Abby and Kellie and hopes they work together to get a Bayoneta to win.

VOTES:
Abby ~ JOEY
Ben ~ CYNTHIA
Cory ~ CYNTHIA
Cynthia ~ JOEY
Joey ~ CYNTHIA
Kerri ~ CYNTHIA


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THE FEELING OF BETRAYAL ~ CASAYA
Abby, Ben, Cory, Joey & Kerri
Returning to camp after voting Cynthia off Abby walks off, clearly not happy at the results. Ben follows her and asks her what is wrong. She tells him that she feels betrayed, as Cynthia was a friend that she did not want gone and he voted her out.

In confessional Abby says that she feels alone right now and that all of her allegiances are officially over at this point. She will take anyone out that she has to in order to gain the upper hand.

Ben tells her that he didn’t realize that voting Cynthia out would bother her so much, he just felt that she was a weaker link than Joey, but promises her that they will vote Joey out next.

Ben states in confessional that he really likes Abby, and wishes he didn’t act so stupidly in voting out Cynthia as now she is mad at him, promises that he will make it up to her.

TRUST? ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jerrell, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert
Robert and Richard are talking about the game. Richard doesn’t feel that Crystal is worth keeping around cause she isn’t as strong as Jessica. He agrees that he likes her more but they have to be smart about who they keep.

In confessional, Robert says that he has a bad feeling about Richard and doesn’t fully trust him. Hopes he is wrong.

Mike joins them and Robert tells him what Richard said. Mike is confused, stating that Crystal is strong enough and that they need to break up the alliance of Kerri and Jessica. Richard still feels she shouldn’t be the first to go, that Jerrell would be a better person to vote out first.

Both Robert and Mike roll their eyes in annoyance but reluctantly agree with him.

In confessional Richard starts to go into a rant about how he has been drafted into a larger alliance that he does not want to be a part of.

AN ALLIANCE GROWS ~ CASAYA
Abby, Ben, Cory, Joey & Kerri
Kerri and Cory talk about what to do next. Kerri feels that they need to get Amber out of the game but that the other tribe will probably keep her safe by sending her to Exile Island. Cory says that if that happens the best bet would be to vote out Abby, as both Ben and Joey voted with them, they’ll be better to keep around. Kerri agrees with him, though she says that she sort of likes Abby, so wishes she would work with them.

Kerri starts saying how she really likes her current tribe, while in confessional, she says that she wants to go to the end with Jessica and Cory as they are the two that she trusts the most in this game. She wants Amber and Crystal out the most and that she likes Abby and Ben, but cannot stand Joey so might turn things around somehow.

SETTING UP FOR LATER ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jerrell, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert
Jessica gets Jerrell and Kellie to talk with her. She tells them about how Crystal is such a weak pathetic person that they should vote her out as soon as possible. Jerrell completely agrees with her and says that he will talk to Robert about joining with them. She is happy to hear this and then asks Kellie what she thinks.

In confessional Kellie says that she doesn’t mind Crystal and doesn’t think she is as bad as Jessica makes her sound, but she thinks aligning with Jessica and Jerrell is a smarter move for down the road.

Kellie tells Jessica that she is with them. Jessica tells them that they will team up with Kerri at the merge and control this game. Jerrell gets excited.

While in confessional Jerrell starts saying that he is beyond excited to be included in an alliance and thinks that he can go far, glad to finally have friends in this game

EXILE ISLAND
Amber
Amber says that she has been spending as much of her time looking for the idol but thinks that someone may have found it already. As she followed the clues and went straight to the spot that Cory found the idol. She says that she knows that Crystal, Jessica and Cory are the only people to be here, so she wonders which one of them has it, hopes that it is Crystal but thinks she would have told her had she found it. Hopes Jessica didn’t find it.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE #4
The tribes all enter the challenge beach where Jeff is waiting for them.

As the Casaya tribe walks in, they are told that Cynthia has been voted out.

Kellie is shocked, Jessica is pleased.

Jeff then calls for Amber to rejoin Casaya.

They then do the challenge which is a relay challenge…

The winning team is…

CASAYA!

Meaning Vivero is heading to tribal council.

With Casaya the winners they get to send one member of Vivero too Exile Island, they decide to send Mike.

EXILE ISLAND
Mike
Walking into Exile Island, Mike says that he is worried about the vote as he worries that Jerrell and Kellie will vote with Jessica, causing a tie. He hopes that it works out for Richard, Crystal and Robert.

RETURNING ~ CASAYA
Abby, Amber, Ben, Cory, Joey & Kerri
Returning to camp, Amber exclaims that she is excited to finally meet her new tribe mates. Kerri and Joey both just walk off, Cory, Ben and Abby talk with her and they all get along great.

In confessional, Amber states that she feels like she is in a very bad spot, cause no one seemed to really care that Kerri and Joey just walked off and that probably means they are with her.

Cory walks away and Amber asks both Ben and Abby if they are with Kerri. They tell her no, Abby says she wants Joey out next. Amber tells her that she is with them on that, just that she’d like to take Kerri out as well. They agree with her.

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jerrell, Jessica, Kellie, Richard & Robert
Returning to camp, Robert and Crystal discuss the vote and Robert tells her that Richard wants to vote Jerrell out first, she says whatever, she knows things won’t go the way she wants right away but as long as Jessica goes soon, she’s fine. Robert says that it should work out that way.

In confessional Crystal says that she doesn’t like Richard that he seems to not really care about their alliance and worries that he’ll betray them tonight.

Jessica talks with Richard about voting Crystal, he says that he thinks that is the best move to make, as she is easily the weakest.

TRIBAL COUNCIL #4
Crystal, Jerrell, Jessica, Kellie, Richard & Robert

The six members of Vivero enter Tribal Council and are instructed by Jeff to get their torches and light them, as fire represents their life in this game, once their torch is snuffed, so are they.

He immediately starts asking them what has been happening at camp.

Kellie tells him that the tribe is divided three to three, with Richard in the middle, and with Mike at exile it makes tonight’s vote very unpredictable.

Both Robert and Crystal make a look of annoyance towards Richard. He says that he isn’t sure what the right move is because he likes everyone and wants the tribe to remain strong. Crystal gets defensive, saying that she works hard and does well in the challenges, so she isn’t the weakest, but because of Jessica and Kerri they all see her as the weakest.

Robert says that he feels the weakest is Jerrell, as he hasn’t really cared about the game since day one and now all of a sudden cares, it annoys him to see someone like Crystal fight so hard to stay in and someone like Jerrell not fight at all and make it farther.

Jerrell also gets defensive saying that he has always cared but also always felt he had no prayer because of Joey. Robert calls bullshit on him, saying that Cory and he didn’t like Joey one bit and would have voted him out before Jerrell. Jerrell is a bit shocked and doesn’t say anything more.

Jeff decides to end the discussion and get to the vote…

After all six votes, Jeff gets the voting urn…

He begins to read the votes…

CRYSTAL…

CRYSTAL…

CRYSTAL…

JERRELL…

JERRELL…

The final vote…

JERRELL!

There is a tie, and Jeff asks everyone if anyone would change their votes. Everyone shakes their heads as no. Jeff then tells them that this game is all about fire representing your life, as of now both Crystal and Jerrell’s fire is smoldering, they need to get it going to remain in the game, therefore they will face off in a fire-making challenge and whoever loses will be out of the game.

The fire-making challenge starts and Jerrell has no idea what he is doing and Crystal knows exactly what she is doing, easily beating Jerrell…

Jerrell, The Tribe Has Spoken!

As Jerrell leaves the game, Jeff tells them that it seems this tribe has a huge struggle going forward if they remain this divided.

JERRELL’S FINAL WORDS
Jerrell is in absolute shock, didn’t even feel like they would vote for him until Robert mentioned him not fighting to stay in the game, he is thankful that Jessica and Kellie stayed true to him and wishes them the best of luck.

VOTES:
Crystal ~ JERRELL
Jessica ~ CRYSTAL
Jerrell ~ CRYSTAL
Kellie ~ CRYSTAL
Richard ~ JERRELL
Robert ~ JERRELL

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What about Purple Rock? I'm confused.
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about the tie? I don't like the purple rock twist, I've done it once in a story before and it wasn't enjoyable at all. I like the fire making challenges that they do after the tie.
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ANGER AND DECEIT ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jessica, Kellie, Richard & Robert

As they walk back into camp Jessica starts on Richard for lying to her. He says that while he agreed with her on some points, he didn’t like the way she went about things. She promises him that he will pay for betraying her. She walks away annoyed.

Kellie tells Richard that she is happy that he got rid of Jerrell, and tells Crystal she is sorry for voting for her, it wasn’t personal in the least, just felt it was her only option. Crystal accepts.

In confessional Kellie states that she realizes that with Jerrell going and not Crystal, it puts her in a very bad spot, however, with Jessica flipping out on Richard gives her a chance, as she’ll distance herself from Jessica and get in on the new alliance until a new opportunity arises to gain control again.

PLAYING THE GAME~ CASAYA
Abby, Amber, Ben, Cory, Joey & Kerri

Amber and Abby get along great and Ben has promised Abby that he is with her to the end. They each hope that Jessica was voted out, as that would annoy Kerri a lot and then send one of Cory, Joey or Kerri to exile and they can vote one of them out.

In confessional Ben states that he now has two final three alliances, one with Richard and Mike and another with Amber and Abby. He’d like to get the two groups to work together but would rather be final two with Abby over everyone else.

Amber tells the two of them that this is the first time that she feels like she has a chance. They both tell her that they are going to get Kerri and Jessica out as soon as possible, Ben stating that hopefully Jessica is already gone.

EXILE ISLAND
Mike

Mike is sitting relaxing, and tells the camera that he has looked for the idol but couldn’t figure it out, is hoping that no one has found it yet though, and if someone has, hopes that it was Amber last time.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE #5

The tribes all enter the challenge beach where Jeff is waiting for them.

As the Vivero tribe walks in, they are told that Jerrell has been voted out.

Joey is beyond happy, stating that it is about time.

Jeff then calls for Mike to rejoin Vivero.

They then do the challenge which is a puzzle challenge…

The winning team is…

VIVERO!

Meaning Casaya is heading to tribal council.

With Vivero the winners they get to send one member of Casaya too Exile Island, they decide to send Amber.

EXILE ISLAND
Amber

Amber returns to Exile Island, feeling that she has no prayer of going to tribal council before the merge at this rate. She hopes Abby can make it through the next tribal council.

A BAD MOVE? ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

They celebrate winning the challenge as they walk into camp. Jessica, however, yells at them to stop sending Amber to exile, that it is cheapening the game saving just her and tells Mike and Richard that maybe Ben will be voted out because of this. They both look at each other and agree.

In confessional Richard states that sending Amber to exile again was done to keep Crystal’s friend in but none of them even know if they would like Amber or if she would work with them, so keeping her safe could be a bad move.

COMING TOGETHER ~ CASAYA
Abby, Ben, Cory, Joey & Kerri

As the tribe walks into camp, Abby and Ben walk off feeling defeated. Abby is certain she is done for tonight. Kerri walks up to them and tells them that they need to bring their tribe together so they don’t lose again. They agree, and Kerri asks them to vote with her and Cory for Joey and the final four can be them. Abby agrees, Ben is a little skeptical.

In confessional Cory talks about Kerri’s plan to get Abby and Ben on their side, and how that’ll help once the merge comes.

TRIBAL COUNCIL #5
Abby, Ben, Cory, Joey & Kerri

The five members of Vivero enter Tribal Council and are instructed by Jeff to get their torches and light them, as fire represents their life in this game, once their torch is snuffed, so are they.

He immediately starts asking them what has been happening at camp.

Joey states that Abby, Ben and Amber are the outsiders and that one of Abby or Ben is done tonight.

Jeff exclaims that is a bold claim, but Joey says that Kerri, Cory and him are a tight group and will control the game.

Abby rolls her eyes and tells Jeff that Joey is an emotional player and cannot be trusted one bit, so shouldn’t be too sure of himself.

Kerri states that things are a lot more positive when Amber is not around and that she feels that Amber should be going tonight but as she can’t, the next best choice will be leaving.

Jeff decides to end the discussion and get to the vote…

After all five votes, Jeff gets the voting urn…

He begins to read the votes…

ABBY…

JOEY…

JOEY…

ABBY…

The final vote…

JOEY!

Joey, The Tribe Has Spoken!

As Joey leaves the game, Jeff tells them that they don’t seem to be working together too well, that they need to come together if they want to win.

JOEY’S FINAL WORDS
Joey is beyond angry and goes on a rant against Kerri, stating that she is a lying bitch and no one should trust her one bit. He hopes that Cory makes it to the end.

VOTES:
Abby ~ JOEY
Ben ~ JOEY
Cory ~ ABBY
Joey ~ ABBY
Kerri ~ JOEY

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PostSubject: Re: Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted   Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted EmptyMon Dec 13, 2010 3:23 am

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about the tie? I don't like the purple rock twist, I've done it once in a story before and it wasn't enjoyable at all. I like the fire making challenges that they do after the tie.

That's messing with Survivor lore/rules :\

I avoid deadlocks in general. I have a couple of boot lists on my laptop that I had planned to turn into something, but I'm a little lazy.

I am, however, currently working on a fanfic with original players. It isn't finished yet, but I may post it when it is ready.

There is one point where I used Purple Rock in a spec/fanfic, but it was unlikely, and I only did it to save a certain goddess for that round.
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"While in confessional Jerrell starts saying that he is beyond excited to be included in an alliance and thinks that he can go far, glad to finally have friends in this game."

"Joey is beyond happy, stating that it is about time."

"Joey is beyond angry and goes on a rant against Kerri, stating that she is a lying bitch and no one should trust her one bit."

A big problem with writing fanfics like this, imo, is that your writing style will often be restrained. You get the point across, but you use repetitive language.

I do this a lot as well when I'm writing in note form, which is why I like to write it in full.

Just a thought.
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PostSubject: Re: Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted   Survivor ~ Panama Exile Island ~ Episode 5 Posted EmptyMon Dec 13, 2010 3:38 am

Words like: jubilant, enraged, morose, exhilarated, thrilled.

There's a scene on it in Dead Poets Society.

That's all I got. Intensify an emotion with a better emotion, as opposed to an adjective.
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I did not even realize I did that, thanks for pointing that out, usually try to switch up words but sometimes miss that. I will try to not let that happen again.

as for the ties, Survivor has only done the purple rock one season, the fire-making challenge has been done multiple times. Plus season ones tie-breaker was a challenge, not a purple rock (they never had a deadlocked tie, therefore it was never utilized).
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THE NEXT STEP~ CASAYA
Abby, Ben, Cory & Kerri

As they return to camp Abby looks at Cory and asks him why he voted for her if the plan was to all vote out Joey, even Kerri looks at him confused, he looks at them all and tells them that he did it only so that Joey would think everything was fine until the final vote was read.

In confessional Abby says that she doesn’t believe a word that Cory says but that at this point she doesn’t care much either, she’s still here and that is what is important.

Kerri explains to Ben and Abby that if they lose again and Amber is sent yet again to exile that it’ll have to be a tie. They agree, and all hope that Amber doesn’t go to Exile Island again.

SHUNNED AND WORRIED~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

Jessica is being completely shunned by the entire tribe. Kellie keeps her distance so as not to make people wary of her. Richard won’t go near her cause she snaps at him every single time.

Robert, Mike and Crystal sit down and discuss the game and wonder what is going on with the other tribe. Mike hopes that Ben is safe and tells Crystal that if they win the next challenge that they will send Ben to exile instead of Amber. She understands but hopes that they lose cause then they can take Jessica out.

In confessional Mike states that as of right now he feels that Amber and Ben are both important to his game plan and taking out Jessica next might be a good move.

THE SECRET~ CASAYA
Abby, Ben, Cory & Kerri

Cory and Kerri are sitting alone while Abby and Ben are off somewhere else. Cory pulls out the Hidden Immunity Idol and tells her that they are safe if they do end up having to cause a tie. This makes Kerri exhilarated, but she says hopefully they don’t have to use it until the merge.

In confessional Kerri is extremely arrogant and explains that there is no way her game is going to falter at this point, everything has worked out perfectly for her.

A FAKE PROMISE ~ VIVERO
Crystal, Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

Kellie and Robert talk about the game and what they are both thinking. Kellie tells him that she suspects that Abby is in an alliance with Kerri, and Robert says he expects the same from Joey and Cory. They both agree that they believe that Ben was voted out, but Robert also says that he wouldn’t be surprised if Joey was gone. The two of them make a deal that they will do everything they can to keep one another safe.

In confessional Kellie states that she has no plans to keep Robert safe, but that having him keep her safe should help her out, especially when it comes to voting Abby out.

EXILE ISLAND
Amber

Amber goes on about how she hates being at Exile Island, she’s really worried that Abby or Ben was voted out, she hopes that some miracle happened to save them both.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE #6

The tribes all enter the challenge beach where Jeff is waiting for them.

As the Vivero tribe walks in, they are told that Joey has been voted out.

Jeff then calls for Amber to rejoin Vivero.

Amber is really excited to see both Abby and Ben.

They then do the challenge which is a puzzle challenge…

The winning team is…

CASAYA!

Meaning Casaya is heading to tribal council.

With Casaya the winners they get to send one member of Vivero to Exile Island, they decide to send Crystal.

EXILE ISLAND
Crystal

All Crystal can say is that this is the one round she hates coming to exile, knowing that Jessica is almost certainly going to be voted out. She hopes nothing stops it from happening though.

REGRET ~ CASAYA
Abby, Amber, Ben, Cory & Kerri

As the tribe enters camp, Kerri celebrates sending Crystal to exile and Cory looks at her like she is an idiot, stating that she should have sent Jessica to keep her from being voted out. Kerri stops dead in her tracks and feels completely stupid.

In confessional Kerri realizes how stupid sending Crystal is. She hopes that Jessica isn’t voted out since she deserves to be here more than anyone else in this game.

Ben, Amber and Abby all celebrate the fact that Kerri just made a colossal mistake and cannot wait until the next challenge to see Jessica gone. Abby tells Amber of the deal Kerri made with her to vote Joey out. Amber calls Kerri an idiot as she says she keeps making mistake after mistake.

THE FINAL MOMENTS ~ VIVERO
Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

As the tribe walks into camp, Jessica pleads with the group to vote Richard out, that he cannot be trusted one bit. Richard tries to defend himself but no one speaks up for him, not even Mike. Everyone goes their own ways and Jessica tells Richard to pack his bags.

In confessional Richard states that he feels that he could definitely be going home tonight, no one has really talked game to him since after voting out Jerrell.

Mike and Robert discuss the vote and Mike says that he doesn’t know if he trusts Richard at all, but that they definitely need Jessica out of this game. Robert explains that whoever goes tonight will impact the way the rest of the game goes, that they need to be smart about it.

TRIBAL COUNCIL #6
Jessica, Kellie, Mike, Richard & Robert

The five members of Vivero enter Tribal Council and are instructed by Jeff to get their torches and light them, as fire represents their life in this game, once their torch is snuffed, so are they.

He immediately starts asking them what has been happening at camp.

Jessica explains to Jeff that Richard has become an outsider for playing both sides at the last tribal council.

Richard defends himself telling the group that he stayed true to his word and never said he was going to vote for Crystal, just that it would be a smart move.

Mike tells Jeff that while Richard may not have voted for Crystal or even specifically said so, the fact that he went to the opposing alliance and agreed with them and made them think he might vote with them is reason enough to not trust him.

Jeff asks Robert, where does this come in for tonight’s vote?

Robert starts to say that it’s a matter of who is better to keep around for the long haul.

Jeff decides to end the discussion and get to the vote…

After all five votes, Jeff gets the voting urn…

He begins to read the votes…

RICHARD…

JESSICA…

JESSICA…

JESSICA…

The final vote…

JESSICA!

Jessica, The Tribe Has Spoken!

As Jessica leaves the game, Jeff tells them that with this vote it seems they are united how will that affect their futures in this game.

JESSICA’S FINAL WORDS
Jessica rants that she was a lot better at this game than Richard and that because of circumstances, he is still in the game and she is out. She hopes that Kerri pulls it off somehow with all of these idiots.

VOTES:
Jessica ~ RICHARD
Kellie ~ JESSICA
Mike ~ JESSICA
Richard ~ JESSICA
Robert ~ JESSICA

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